Do you guys think this poem is really crappy i didnt write it so say whatever you want?

what do you think of this.How does it make you feel.(i feel like doctor phil hahah!)

chained down by reality cut open by stress

So down to earth her wrist has a gashing crevis

So scared sad and confused a mess

She feels like everyone could care less

Black mascara and eyeliner running down her pale pink cheeks

Along with the tears of misery puring down like a stream

Red lipstick smeared across her thick lips

The same color as the blood running down her wrists

lieing on the cold linoleum floor

her dark hair across her face she has been here before

Her brown eyes filled with a pained __expression so far from dry

she knows she has to leave here this is her last cry

cracks open a bottle of toxic stuff poors it down her throat

falls down to the floor as her favorite band pumping through the speakers plays the last note

closes her eyes her brain turns off

her boyfriend comes home and he wants to scoff

Why because she looked so elegant in that black dress

with her pretty little face and dark makeup her black hair a mess

he holds her as tears fall from his face

One last time he kisses her ruby lips and can taste her beauty and grace

Do you guys think this poem is really crappy i didnt write it so say whatever you want?

its alright but i dont like depressing poems. that makes me want to go and slit my wrists. oh, by the way, you cant die from sliting your wrists - there are a lot of little blood vessels but not enough to actualy bleed to death before the blood clots. if you want to die, cut above your elbow in a straight line to bleed to death, theres an artery there, fit that in the poem and it will sound better.

Do you guys think this poem is really crappy i didnt write it so say whatever you want?

That's really sad. It's a good poem, the tone of it is just sad and shows how depressed the girl is. You can feel how much pain she's in.

Do you guys think this poem is really crappy i didnt write it so say whatever you want?

'tis alright. kind of really emo and depressing.

mmm...i don't like the way she tried to squish in all the words....it throws the rhythm off. she could have done WAAY better with a free verse poem. rhyming is slightly overrated and usually makes a poem sound cheesy. rhyming is usually so badly done, it makes me cringe. people shouldn't rhyme without the rhythm.

other than that, purrty good.

Do you guys think this poem is really crappy i didnt write it so say whatever you want?

its kinda sad but a very good poem..

Do you guys think this poem is really crappy i didnt write it so say whatever you want?

I like it! Some of the words i would change but who ever wrote it can really get into what they are writing about!

Do you guys think this poem is really crappy i didnt write it so say whatever you want?

~beautiful %26amp;sad-how heartbreaking to be that depressed.~

Do you guys think this poem is really crappy i didnt write it so say whatever you want?

Its sad and if you did write it maybe you need talk to someone.

Do you guys think this poem is really crappy i didnt write it so say whatever you want?

Oh that is a sad one

Politically Speaking. .. . . ... . . . Did You Ever Want To 'Rock The Casbah' ?

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. . . . . . Now the king told the boogie men

You have to let that raga drop

The oil down the desert way

Has been shakin' to the top

The sheik he drove his Cadillac

He went a' cruisin' down the ville

The muezzin was a' standing

On the radiator grille

CHORUS

Sharif don't like it

Rockin' the casbah

Rock the casbah

The shareef don't like it

Rock the Casbah

Rock the Casbah

By order of the prophet

We ban that boogie sound

Degenerate the faithful

With that crazy Casbah sound

But the Bedouin they brought out

The electric kettle drum

The local guitar picker

Got his guitar picking thumb

As soon as the sherif

Had cleared the square

They began to wail

CHORUS

Now over at the temple

Oh! They really pack 'em in

The in crowd say it's cool

To dig this chanting thing

But as the wind changed direction

The temple band took five

The crowd caught a wiff

Of that crazy Casbah jive

CHORUS

The king called up his jet fighters

He said you better earn your pay

Drop your bombs between the minarets

Down the Casbah way

As soon as Sharif was

Chauffeured outta there

The jet pilots tuned to

The cockpit radio blare

As soon as Sharif was

Outta their hair

The jet pilots wailed

CHORUS

He thinks it's not kosher

Fundamentally he can't take it.

You know he really hates it.

Politically Speaking. .. . . ... . . . Did You Ever Want To 'Rock The Casbah' ?

I don't really care about yahoo profiting on a suspension. I suspect enough people actually leave as create a new account.

I do enjoy me some Clash though. Have it on Itunes now, thanks.

Politically Speaking. .. . . ... . . . Did You Ever Want To 'Rock The Casbah' ?

R.C., You will have to go to your related question, to see my answer, not only there, but for here, as well.

Politically Speaking. .. . . ... . . . Did You Ever Want To 'Rock The Casbah' ?

let yahoo know the people on the right they do this too are the ones who hold investments and their jobs in our hands. If they do not change this then they can go to the unemployment line with the drive by media looking for jobs.

I do and and every one should take this action.

Also let the advertisers know your displeasure with this and them supporting them.

Will this man ever be successful in life?

He is kinda quirky, but really sweet. He has long wavy brown hair that goes to his chest, but is always in a ponytail. He has very pretty big blue eyes, and no facial blemishes. He is about 5'11" and skinny, about 130 pounds, but doesnt look scrawny ...would his looks deter him from being successful? he always wears black band tees and jeans...any ideas?

Will this man ever be successful in life?

poor guy

Will this man ever be successful in life?

Sounds like you're describing Bill Gates in 1982, so I would say Yes.

Will this man ever be successful in life?

He's a pretty boy. Not enough info.

Will this man ever be successful in life?

WHY NOT??

Will this man ever be successful in life?

Sounds like my brother a few years ago...he has a PhD in statistics and does quite well...although he did cut the hair a few years ago but that was long after he started his job. Still has the earrings tho.

Will this man ever be successful in life?

I dont think the look doest matter to deter a person being successful or not . . . .

Will this man ever be successful in life?

no i believe that with determenation and will power u can get anywhere u want in life as long as you try.. believe in yourself and have confidence.. no matter what u look like.. work hard and u shall recieve... simple as that.. your out look doesnt determine success in the real world.. look at bill gates.. and some other not so good looking stars.. (too many to name).. the only way his looks will hold him back from being succesfull is if hes planning on being a model... but even that.. u require a unique look... with confidence.. anything can happen so its possible..

i think u wont have a successful life though, if u keep on worrying about other peoples lives.. focus on your own and do what U got to do to survive!

Will this man ever be successful in life?

People grow out of those phases so I wouldn't discount the guy just yet... By the way, I once had shoulder length hair and wore band tees all the time. I guess I'm successful in life. :-)

Help with my Xbox 360?

Hi.

When I have my Xbox turned on, I sometimes play music through it from my Lap top, it only seems to recognise some albums/tracks. These are all in the same location and all on mp3 or wma format. Why for example would the xbox recognise one band, but when I go to select another it doent appear on the play list?

Its making me lose hair!

ARRRRGGGGHJJHHHHH

Help with my Xbox 360?

are u using wmp11

say no coz ill lose my hair too

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

They are a great band. some ppl think there emo but seriously there not. so like what's ya'lls fav songs and why do U like the band? my favorite song is Famous Last Words. well that's pretty much it for now

p.s. which did u like better blonde or Black hair lol i just want to know

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

my favorite song by my chem is either early sunsets over monroville or thank you for the venom. y do i love them? wuts not 2 love? after actually listenin 2 their lyrics n how heartfelt they r ull c y. on top of that meeting them is a blast they r the most down 2 earth guys ive ever met and they really kno how 2 interact wit thier fans. they have a gr8 concept behind each n every record n song n r tyin 2 stop the violence. they put out a gr8 message 2 kids , they dont want us 2 hurt ourselves in ne way of drink or do drugs they kno where it leads n they r tryin 2 save us.bein a fan n watchin them grow has tought me alot they arent afraid 2 b themselves or take risks. they r the gr8est band 4 all these reasons n so many more. but id b her 4ever.

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

i don't.

they're emo.

avril's better.

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

I like Famous Last Words as well. They're just all together great. I luv the lyrics

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

I dont. And i dont know why people like them

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

i like the black parade song

i like them bc they look like cool people and their songs are really cool and they arent impersonators

i like the black hair better

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

I don't like them.

I like their old stuf better.

now they're just whack.

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

I don't, toodles!

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

They're kinda crappy. All that Emo music is. and it depends how you look on the hair thing.

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

I dont but not because they are emo since I dont know what the hell emo is. I just think they suck.

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

he's better blonde. he looks kinda cleaner :)

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

There music is filled with such emotion and power that when you listen to them you really feel connected to the songs and i think thats what rock these days is missing

and black hair is so much better

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

i like the blond hair and i luvvvvvvvv the song helana

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

i don't like them, but he looks like the girl from the cranberries with blonde hair, and he looks like michael jackson with black so either way, i think he should be bald and he'd look like billy corgan.

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

i don't they suck just like panic at the disco and fall out boy

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

They are pretty good. I liked Helena the most and famous last words is a pretty good song too. I like the blonde hair better also. I really didn't like the black hair.

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

I dont, i think they are whiny little boys who should crawl back up their @rses and stay there forever.

and its always the people who say they arenmt emo that are...

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

Love them, coz they're great, and my fav song is Helena ... I think it's the best so far.

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

I'm not OK, its f-cking amazing

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

i dont know that i like them that much.

but he is like way way way hotter with blonde hair. definetly blonde. definetly.

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

no mcr here they suck just like panic and the red jumpsuit whatevers

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

personally, i used to really like them

but now, ive discovered bands that are so much more real, and much less produced and pop-y

theyre not emo, theyre wanna-be emo

they have people that write songs for them that don't mean anything, makeup artists, people to dress them and endorsers

in my opinion, they are just another conformist shallow exploited band

no matter what anyone says, i really dont feel any emotion except boredom when listening to them

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

I like them because they make good music. My favorite song is welcome to the black parade. I like blonde hair better.

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

My favorite is Helena.

I don't think they are emo.

I like them because they know how to please mostly everyone.

I like Gerard's hair shaggy and black.

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

I don't really have a favorite song right now, but I have been listening to "Cemetary Drive", "Mama", and "Teenagers" a lot lately.

I love My Chemical Romance because they aren't a judgemental band. They understand what it is like to be unaccepted, and wanting revenge. I like them because I always feel like I belong to something when I am listening to their music. :)

I also am obsessed with the lyrics, and the guitar (lead, bass, and rythym), drums, voice, and piano are AMAZING!!! :)

Ummmm........ both. He is drop dead sexy either way. :)

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

i love mcr, and so many of their songs; helena, teenagers, famous last words, im not okay, mama, disenchanted, ghost of you, sharpest lives and so many others. i like the black hair better. i don;t care what other people say about them, everyone can have their opinions but i love them

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

I absolutely love them! They're music is just so touching to me. They write their songs because they want to touch people's souls, and they really do! My favorite song has to be Mama. I don't know why, I just love that song. But I love all of their songs, really. Defiantly black hair.

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

I don't like them that much. I like about four songs from them but thats about it tho. I have seen them live, and they were not that good. But, I must say he looks a lot better with black hair.

Thanks! ^%26gt;^

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

my chemical romance is one of my favorite bands. my fovorite song is welcome to the black parade. I like the lyrics. black hair is better

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

Umm whats your definition of emo. By most standards theyy are because there music usually has to do with sad stuff and real human emotions. I liked there first two albums better, they were more creative, especially the first.

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

Their sound,

the meanings of their songs.,

Their look.

The way they have so much energy during live performances.

If you don't like them now.. listen to a few of their songs.. find the lyrics.. and take in what it all means.

Just because their songs are meaningful and to some teens theraputic in hectic times..

does not mean

They're Emo.

MY Chemical Romance. Why do YOU like them ?

no, thanks for the points

Aaaaaaaaaaah! Please help, I'm freaking out!?

I accidentally burned myself with a hair curler the other day on the knuckle of my ring finger. First it was red, but today it filled with pus and the skin came off. I immediately put a band-aid on it, but I recently read about boils and how deadly the staphh (or stapph) infections can be. I'm so scared!!! Please tell me if what I have is that and if it's serious. Also, what can I do to treat it? Thank you! You have no idea how much I need answers to this.

Aaaaaaaaaaah! Please help, I'm freaking out!?

You're right, staph infections can be serious. But certain antibiotics can be used to treat the infection.

You're right again, because you said you burned yourself. Your body is just trying to heal itself. It is important to keep the area covered to protect it from germs and bacteria.

Washing your hands is important, even if you didn't get burned. But make sure to change your dressing (band-aids, guaze wraps, etc.) often to keep the area dry.

Also, don't try picking on the blisters or scabs. It would just take longer for it to heal.

If there are signs of an infection, go see your doctor.

Aaaaaaaaaaah! Please help, I'm freaking out!?

You have a 2nd degree burn. It will heal on its own. Keep the area clean, bandage it, and a little Neosporin won't hurt.

Aaaaaaaaaaah! Please help, I'm freaking out!?

Clean it real good with peroxide and use an antibiotic ointment and then cover with a band-aid to protect it....

Aaaaaaaaaaah! Please help, I'm freaking out!?

it's clear you haven't encountered real problems in life yet.

Aaaaaaaaaaah! Please help, I'm freaking out!?

Put Neosporin on it.

Aaaaaaaaaaah! Please help, I'm freaking out!?

Yah... stop with the hand sanitizers, those are really bad for you. Antibacterial gels and soaps kill the good microorganisms that protect your body from the harmful bacteria that try and infect you. Other than that the advice before me is all very good. Don't worry about it, it's not anything serious.

Aaaaaaaaaaah! Please help, I'm freaking out!?

Please don't freak out! You probably have a second-degree burn, and I am pretty sure you don't have a staph infection. Put some antibiotic cream on it and it will heal up in a few days. It is really not that serious, but it may leave a scar. It may heal a little faster without a band-aid on it. If you are really worried, go to a doctor or a clinic. Good luck!

Aaaaaaaaaaah! Please help, I'm freaking out!?

I would go to the e.r . because my mom is a nurse and she always tells me how careful to be at school because it can lead to Merca. -Good Luck, Farmboy's Daughter

Aaaaaaaaaaah! Please help, I'm freaking out!?

Put fresh aloe on a burn right away!!! If you get a blister try to not let it pop, if it does, don't cover it, it needs to dry out, put aloe on after washing with a good anti-bacterial soap...Also, it is good to be concerned but try not to feed into the fear the media is peddling, it will drive you crazy.

Aaaaaaaaaaah! Please help, I'm freaking out!?

Burns also cause blisters. Some skin infections caused by staph can look a lot like burns. Staph (and other bacteria) have an easier time infecting damaged skin than intact skin.

Don't panic. Just keep it clean, put on antibiotic ointment, and see a doctor promptly in the event that it seems to be getting worse instead of better from now on.

FYI:

-Staph infections are still treatable with normal antibiotics more often than not (that is, it's not necessarily MRSA even if you get a staph infection. )

-Even if it is MRSA, someone with a healthy immune system can usually handle a skin infection without it ever going systemic and causing major problems.

Aaaaaaaaaaah! Please help, I'm freaking out!?

im not sure if this will help but i burned myself on the oven and it was a red line then the next day it filled with pus and i had a tournament so i kept popping it accidently and it kept fillin back up but the next 2 days it was gone! just asked your mom she probably knows more than anyone else good luck n stay calm!

Aaaaaaaaaaah! Please help, I'm freaking out!?

just keep it clean. if it still bothers you go c ur doctor.

Aaaaaaaaaaah! Please help, I'm freaking out!?

just keep it covered thats all you can do..you are in no danger! so dont worry about it. The only cure fo rthis is time. Give it a while to heal. good luck

Wrong way to go about it? how do you cope with an ex?

well we both go to the same college but lucky i haven't seen him for a few days i was heartbroken when he broke up with me on msn and found myself missing him and thinking about him every day. now i tell myself that he no longer exists and i find this helps me cope, the nice person he once was has gone he's really changed. you see that when i met him, he was starting off in a band later he gained a fan club and became big headed (he's not even good looking)what happened to that sweet person i used to know, he couldn't even dump me to my face and i still have him on msn but he doesn't make any effort to talk to me. what should i do? right now pretending he doesn't exists is helping me but are there any other ways to cope?i even got a new hair cut and clothes and i have to say that did make me feel some what better, but are their any other ways ? how did you cope? pretending they don't exist a good idea?

Wrong way to go about it? how do you cope with an ex?

There's no quick fix. It takes time to heal a broken bone and it takes time to heal a broken heart. Remove him from MSN. Stop asking questions about him. You're not pretending he doesn't exist if you're watching him on MSN and asking about him here.