Do you guys think this poem is really crappy i didnt write it so say whatever you want?

what do you think of this.How does it make you feel.(i feel like doctor phil hahah!)

chained down by reality cut open by stress

So down to earth her wrist has a gashing crevis

So scared sad and confused a mess

She feels like everyone could care less

Black mascara and eyeliner running down her pale pink cheeks

Along with the tears of misery puring down like a stream

Red lipstick smeared across her thick lips

The same color as the blood running down her wrists

lieing on the cold linoleum floor

her dark hair across her face she has been here before

Her brown eyes filled with a pained __expression so far from dry

she knows she has to leave here this is her last cry

cracks open a bottle of toxic stuff poors it down her throat

falls down to the floor as her favorite band pumping through the speakers plays the last note

closes her eyes her brain turns off

her boyfriend comes home and he wants to scoff

Why because she looked so elegant in that black dress

with her pretty little face and dark makeup her black hair a mess

he holds her as tears fall from his face

One last time he kisses her ruby lips and can taste her beauty and grace

Do you guys think this poem is really crappy i didnt write it so say whatever you want?

its alright but i dont like depressing poems. that makes me want to go and slit my wrists. oh, by the way, you cant die from sliting your wrists - there are a lot of little blood vessels but not enough to actualy bleed to death before the blood clots. if you want to die, cut above your elbow in a straight line to bleed to death, theres an artery there, fit that in the poem and it will sound better.

Do you guys think this poem is really crappy i didnt write it so say whatever you want?

That's really sad. It's a good poem, the tone of it is just sad and shows how depressed the girl is. You can feel how much pain she's in.

Do you guys think this poem is really crappy i didnt write it so say whatever you want?

'tis alright. kind of really emo and depressing.

mmm...i don't like the way she tried to squish in all the words....it throws the rhythm off. she could have done WAAY better with a free verse poem. rhyming is slightly overrated and usually makes a poem sound cheesy. rhyming is usually so badly done, it makes me cringe. people shouldn't rhyme without the rhythm.

other than that, purrty good.

Do you guys think this poem is really crappy i didnt write it so say whatever you want?

its kinda sad but a very good poem..

Do you guys think this poem is really crappy i didnt write it so say whatever you want?

I like it! Some of the words i would change but who ever wrote it can really get into what they are writing about!

Do you guys think this poem is really crappy i didnt write it so say whatever you want?

~beautiful %26amp;sad-how heartbreaking to be that depressed.~

Do you guys think this poem is really crappy i didnt write it so say whatever you want?

Its sad and if you did write it maybe you need talk to someone.

Do you guys think this poem is really crappy i didnt write it so say whatever you want?

Oh that is a sad one