my name
,my age
my favorite movie,food,tv show, book,subject,hoilday
my family
were i live
my birthday
my favorite band
any sisters
my grade
my hight eye color hair color
my friends
How do i put this into a essay?
You can separate your essay into two parts. The first part will be about yourself. The second part can be about your friends and family. Keep it as simple as possible. Here's an example to get you started:
My name is Bruce and I am twelve years old. I have blond hair and blue eyes. My favorite movie is The Lion King. (etc...)
I live in New York with my family. I have one brother and one sister. My best friend is Chris Kent. (etc...)
How do i put this into a essay?
You might organize the info. You can take all the details you have listed and mention them in a different order than what your question suggests.
A personal section would include stats about just you: age, name, grade, birthday, hair and eye color.
Another paragragph would deal with your family, such as sisters and others.
A third paragraph or part would deal with your favorite activities: movies, food, tv show, books, favorite band.
Friends might be yet another paragraph.
To give your essay a big finish, you might end with whatever subject is most meaninful to you. Friends? A favorite dog? A sports or activity? In this final summing up, you want to be most excited and emotional.
And in fact, if you hint at this favorite aspect of yourself early on, you will give your essay a sense of direction, a purpose. Otherwise you may just be listing details that lack feeling.
How do i put this into a essay?
Just write it all together as if it were a letter to someone who doesn't know you. Like you are introducing yourself to a pen-pal or a cousin whom you'd never met but were planning on visiting.
Or write it like a introduction you would have to give when entering some kind of talent show.
You don't have to follow the exact order of your list as long as you include all the info they are looking for and it all runs smoothly together.
You're going to have several rough drafts until you get it just right. I suggest you just start wrtting it. Then read it out loud. Does it sound good? What can I change to make this flow better. Good writting is all about that little voice in the reader's head.
Another option could be a short story, but an essay is generally meant to be brief yet informative.
Wow, I just got a chance to read the first person's advice. GO with that!
How do i put this into a essay?
This is what I'll probably write:
Hi everyone! My name is Nur Amalina and I'm 15. I'm here to tell you a little something about myself. My favorite movie is Harry Potter 5, Princess Diaries, Shrek series, and anything that is funny or romantic. Some might say I'm a chick-flick lover too. I love the band Nickelback because they ROCK! I like All American Rejects, BEP and other bands too. I love to watch Oprah and read (of course) Harry Potter, and chic-lit.
I go to school in Kuantan, Malaysia, and I'm in the 3rd Form. My favorite subject is Science and English. Don't you think Science is interesting?
My family...Well, there's my Dad, Abdurrahim, he's a pollice officer, and Mum, Rozita, a teacher. I've got two brothers and two sisters, for I'm the second child.
Even though I just moved to Kuantan, I've got to say that I'm getting on well. I could never forget my friends in other places, but that don't mean I'm friendless in here.
Oh yeah, I was born on the first of November, and so far, I am living my dream!
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