Saturday, November 28, 2009

Wat do u think of my story? good? bad? suggestions?

There she was, typing to luisa when HE burst into the room. he stood there standing tall as she sat tensely and breathed in his prescene. then, with the excess of a single exhale, he called her name.



she knew it wasnt possible. it wasnt possible luisa was telling the truth about her seeing the lead singer of one of their favorite bands, and most of all she knew it wanst true he was standing up aginst her helping her pull off her pants. he felt her curves and she forgot to feel embarrased that she wasnt a stick figure like she longed to be. little did she know, that her body helped form the lust that drove him to her.



she tried to pull her shirt the rest of the way off but she couldnt because he started to kiss her. animals by nickelback came onto shuffle on her itunes. gabes hands felt her neck and shoulders and stroke her hair.



but then she heard it. her itunes switched to an oldies song she hated. the only reason it was on there is because luisa downloaded it onto her computer at a sleepover when she was in the bathroom and never took it off. Maddy felt real life again, and it didnt feel good. it felt like fear and it went all through her body.



gabe was still pulling pulling his pants off. "n..no" she stumbled and pushed him off her .he looked up, suprised. and stopped. maddy heard the noised her computer made as she recieved instant messages.



lupexisxloved: maddi?



lupexisxloved: maddi?! are you there?! is something wrong!!



luisa knew maddy would never leave the computer without saying anything. luisa was too much of a worrier for that.



why did i have to set her preferences to read the ims aloud?!, maddy thought, and then she heard the im.



lupexisxloved: ok im coming over! shes gotten quite protective over the years. gabe and maddy exchanged stares. "she lives next door" maddy mentioned quietly. "****" gabe said. "do you have like a closet?" "are you kidding me?!" maddy asked, obviously pissed. "you know whatever, i dont even like her. dont you get it? i like you, maddy."



Wat do u think of my story? good? bad? suggestions?

its pretty good actually. You need to work on your grammar and tone down the sex but otherwise its great!



Wat do u think of my story? good? bad? suggestions?

a common 13 year old brain really ****** up piece of ****



Wat do u think of my story? good? bad? suggestions?

Hey, that was good.



I liked it.



Interesting.



Well, now everyone knows what you think about.



Wat do u think of my story? good? bad? suggestions?

Interesting(if slightly salacious!)You need to stop working as though you're just typing response on ANSWERS. I mean,you need to clean up your grammar and spelling or no one will take your work seriously as in the first sentence were you capitalize "he" it should be italicized or underlined. When someone is thinking,Italicize or underline.Other wise,you bring the reader in on the action in the first sentence(always an attention grabber and very wise to do so)Work on conflict and tension as you write. What are the stakes?Who doesn't want the heroine to get what she wants?Can she really trust her best friend?These are things you need to figure out.



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Why is a brock-a-bella not more popular. I wear mine all the time!?

Ok..I was just wondering. For those who don't know, a brock-a-bella is an umbrella type device that is worn on your head with a head band. I see them on TV at ball games. Mine is red and white, like a candy cane color. I wear it everytime there is even a remote chance of rain. I love mine, and I've always wondered why they weren't a lot more popular. In fact, I am often met with looks of derision and disgust...totally unwarranted I might add. They are the people getting their hair soaked by the rain.



Why is a brock-a-bella not more popular. I wear mine all the time!?

You know they also work very well as a sun shield when working in the garden or mowing the lawn. I have a weather vane perched atop of mine. This way I can tell which way the wind blows and avoid that bad habit of mine of mowing into the wind. Mine is not red and white though, although yours does sound awfully snazzy looking. Mine is of camouflage design. This makes it very versatile on those long jungle safaris I am so prone to taking. Helps me blend right in with the surroundings while at the same time allowing me to detect the direction of any upcoming gale force winds.



Why is a brock-a-bella not more popular. I wear mine all the time!?

They got this new thing where u can hold the umbrella in ur hand. But attaching to ur head is a good idea too.....have fun.



Why is a brock-a-bella not more popular. I wear mine all the time!?

Well I think they look a little bit clownish on me..but I certainly wouldn't give it a second thought of I saw it on someone else. Girl all that matters is if YOU like it. It sounds like you know that and have a sexy, confident attitude yay for you! : )

A band with 2 guys in the late 80s early 90s one of them with very long blond dead locks the other o

black long hair black sunglasses and a hat there used to be a gossip about them that they arenot the real singers they had a hit that in the chorus there is "NOTHING......." and i don't know more i need the name of the band thanks very much



A band with 2 guys in the late 80s early 90s one of them with very long blond dead locks the other one with?

Milli Vanilli



A band with 2 guys in the late 80s early 90s one of them with very long blond dead locks the other one with?

well, if he had DEAD LOCKS, he's probably BALD by now!!



A band with 2 guys in the late 80s early 90s one of them with very long blond dead locks the other one with?

i guess dead locks are a curse for FAKE music like 99% of the studio bands today Milli Vanilli would of been huge today with all the studio tricks artists do

Friday, November 27, 2009

How do you know if you're emo or scene?

my friends always tell that im emo b/c of the bands i like, but then they say i look kind of scene b/c of my hair and the way i dress. so, how do you know if youre emo or scene?whats the diff. between the two?



How do you know if you're emo or scene?

Either way, you are trying WAY too hard to be something you're not.



How do you know if you're emo or scene?

if u have to ask you probably are



How do you know if you're emo or scene?

well only you know that



and my friends are like that and their not emo or what ever.



How do you know if you're emo or scene?

Emo stands for emotional.



You are not emo unless you cut yourself or you cry a lot.



If you listen to emo bands that doesn't mean that YOU are emo.



That just means you like emo bands.



Scene is just a random style of kids with colored hair in there faces, huge ear gages, and vans and converses basically.



Either way labels are stupid and it shouldn't matter which 'label' you are.



=]



How do you know if you're emo or scene?

How do you know if you're emo or scene? You start to stereotype yourself into something that's was just made up as a joke in the first place.



How do you know if you're emo or scene?

Why would you want to LABEL yourself?



Be yourself, and leave labels for soup cans.



How do you know if you're emo or scene?

heyy .



emo ,,, is emotionall ,



like when you cut yerrself because of depression .



its a state of mind .



it has nothinq to do with bands .



yerr probably more scene .



How do you know if you're emo or scene?

well,scene means a trend on myspace where you take pictures at a different angle%26amp;you look kind of well...scene.



emo is you're emotional%26amp;sad.



"like boo-hoo,my life's sad,i wanna kill myself,etc."



i've been called emo because of the bands i like too,and how i dress,after all,most of my clothes are from hot topic.



but dont let people judge you:]



figure out who you really are because it's your body,not your friends too judge who you are or what clique you are:]

Can someone interpret my dream?

Ok i had this dream about a year ago or so.I was in my room sleeping, then I was awakened by people who entered my room. They were 2, one was the vocalist of a famous band(but I hate this band!!!), a man who had a beared and short, black hair. He was wearing a leather jacket.The other one was my childhood crush(I'm only a teenager), she looked exactly the same, the last time I saw her, but her sleeveless shirt was orange, instead of sky blue. They stopped and starred at my computer, then the vocalist, bent down to look at the CPU, then suddenly I noticed that the CPU changed into a cage filled with apples(but it was exactly the same shape as the CPU), he then got a beer mug and scooped a glass of apples. The he(vocalist) and she(childhood crush) went inside my sister's room, which was beside my room. Then curious, I went in the room and saw my childhood crush, sitting(Indian sit) on my sister's bed. I stared at her and she stared back at me.Then she smiled the sweetest smile. Fin



Can someone interpret my dream?

you had too much pizza before you went to sleep



Can someone interpret my dream?

lol



even i get crazy dreams



i heard somewhere spirits can interpret in our dreams



Can someone interpret my dream?

weird



Can someone interpret my dream?

Did you go to bed drunk?



Can someone interpret my dream?

Yes. I can.



Can someone interpret my dream?

Too much, SIMS: THE GAME?



Can someone interpret my dream?

I think you need to fix your computer and get a girlfriend.



Can someone interpret my dream?

Maybe your going crazy! Haha Just Kiddin..



I really have no clue.



Maybe you and your childhood crush are meant to be together and eat apples or something..ha. I really dont know



Can someone interpret my dream?

hehe, u should hear some of the screwed up stuff I dream. you know, i heard from some source that your dreams can tell you something....... i wonder wtf your dream was trying to tell you....heh



Can someone interpret my dream?

The vocalist shows a bad area in your life, and the crush shows a good. The vocalist will have something to do with your life in the computers, and it will be bad, and the good areas of your life will be mixed with your sister.



Can someone interpret my dream?

Wow, no man, that I cannot. I can suggest that the use of psychotropic drugs is probably out of the question for your future. You could possibly write some commercials for Apple Computer, though, so there's that... Oh, and if it was Daughtry, you should've kicked him.



Can someone interpret my dream?

The vocalist is your crushes real dad who greatly enjoys turning computers into apples to physche people out. The smile of your crush means that she admires you greatly and that you bring her happiness! or you just had a wierd dream.



Can someone interpret my dream?

Dreams tend to focus on things you want and things that you fear and in most cases, sometimes they seem to have no meaning at all. I'm not too sure about your whole apples and vocalist and CPU thing, but perhaps you just miss your childhood crush.



Can someone interpret my dream?

Some dreams is only current affair dreams like what u seen%26amp; heard that day and when night came up u are dreaming the same objects that u seen and heard.It will be nice if all of us will be able to solve the meaning of our dreams so that it will guide us what is coming up to our life.To dream of a jacket symbolises protection from danger or in some circumstances, success at work.If u dream of orange or saffron colour indicates a person who has a strongspiritual presence.If u been discouraged in your search 4 spiritual enlighttenment, have patience %26amp;it will be rewarded.

Can anyone help me find a good hairstyle?

i have long hair. with a bit of passion red in the bangs. im in a rock band so i want something that looks a bit "punkish" but i want to keep my hair long choppy and dark. can anyone help me get ideas on what hairstyle i should get? help please! this is what i look like: http://i24.tinypic.com/2qtacro.jpg



http://i21.tinypic.com/29xhr1i.jpg



i would like to try something "emo" or "scene" because its "all the rage" in this era of music right now, but i can't seem to find any good ideas that would go right with me so far.



Can anyone help me find a good hairstyle?

i love it now!



y change it?



Can anyone help me find a good hairstyle?

check the links below for beauty tips to:-- * Hairstyle/cut ideas %26amp; suggestions, based on face shapes



http://homebeautytips.blogspot.com/2006/...



check the links below for beauty tips to:-- *Long Hairstyle tips-



http://homebeautytips.blogspot.com/2007/...

Dont you just hate it when?

your so busy looking at the computer screen and you mean to pick up your brush to do your hair but you run a cheese grater through it instead (again!)??



Now where's that band-aid............?



Dont you just hate it when?

um what kind of crack are you on?



Dont you just hate it when?

my sides are splitting with laughter!



Dont you just hate it when?

who keeps a cheese grater next to the computer?????



Dont you just hate it when?

Yeah, its like when the phone rings and you are doing the ironing....



Dont you just hate it when?

yeah, or you want to blow your nose and pick up a hedgehog instead.



Dont you just hate it when?

thats dumb



Dont you just hate it when?

nice...i love that other answer..who puts a cheese grater next to the computer!!



Dont you just hate it when?

LMAO : - ) Well thanks hun you have just made me smile today after having a terrible day. x



Dont you just hate it when?

yes that is hilarious!



Dont you just hate it when?

oh yeah! happens all the time! my desk is covered in freshly grated head. always a killer! lol



Dont you just hate it when?

Yeah. I keep a cheese grater next to the computer too. Because you never know when you'll need freshly grated cheese.



Dont you just hate it when?

It always happens to me ):



Dont you just hate it when?

lol



Dont you just hate it when?

ouch ......



erm y a chesse grater near computer lmao



gd idea though lol



Dont you just hate it when?

yeah but hey, it saves on the cost of a haircut ;-)



Dont you just hate it when?

Why would you ever confuse that and another thing where's your computer lol

 
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